Thank you. Your wording is more clear and correct. | by Dave Murray | Medium

Dave Murray

Aug 18, 2020·1 min read

Thank you. Your wording is more clear and correct.

Dave Murray

Retired and living my golden years in a world full of angry people.

This is almost perfect. Though I would modify it this way.

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